Ally, You covered 5 of the 10 required topics on your bucket list. But I must say, the ones you covered were done well. I found your script to be very interesting with plenty of interesting facts. Your pictures went well with topics as well. (80/100 daily points due to incomplete list)
Suggestions for improvement: Your voice was loud and clear in some and low volume in others. Narration is very important in a digital story - this is something I would have taken the time to fix. Your total recording is less than 3 minutes so this would not have taken you long to fix this. Slow down when talking - you sounded like you were in a race. A few spots it sounded as if your recording was cut off. -10 (from quality)
No music -5 (from quality). . . I had music on the S drive you could have used. It should have played at least during the credits.
Work cited - it appears you had all url's for information but not for pictures . . -3 copyright law must be followed.
82% - 10 for being over 10 days late = 72% on quality
Further Comment: You also did a nice job with your animation between images and bringing everything together in Movie Maker. Nice job uploading to YouTube and posting it on your blog. There were a lot of steps to this process and the only thing you seem to have trouble with were the recordings.
Ally, You covered 5 of the 10 required topics on your bucket list. But I must say, the ones you covered were done well. I found your script to be very interesting with plenty of interesting facts. Your pictures went well with topics as well. (80/100 daily points due to incomplete list)
ReplyDeleteSuggestions for improvement: Your voice was loud and clear in some and low volume in others. Narration is very important in a digital story - this is something I would have taken the time to fix. Your total recording is less than 3 minutes so this would not have taken you long to fix this. Slow down when talking - you sounded like you were in a race.
A few spots it sounded as if your recording was cut off. -10 (from quality)
No music -5 (from quality). . . I had music on the S drive you could have used. It should have played at least during the credits.
Work cited - it appears you had all url's for information but not for pictures . . -3 copyright law must be followed.
82% - 10 for being over 10 days late = 72% on quality
Further Comment: You also did a nice job with your animation between images and bringing everything together in Movie Maker. Nice job uploading to YouTube and posting it on your blog. There were a lot of steps to this process and the only thing you seem to have trouble with were the recordings.
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